Sorry, Right Number.pdf

Sorry, Right Number

AUTHOR ' S NOTE : Screenplay abbreviations are simple and exist, in this

author's opinion, mostly to make those who write screenplays feel like

lodge brothers. In any case, you should be aware that cu means close-up;

ECU means extreme close-up; INT . means interior, EXT . means exterior, BG

means background; POV means point of view. Probably most of you knew

all that stuff to begin with, right?

ACT I

FADE IN ON:

KATIE WEIDERMAN'S MOUTH, ECU

She's speaking into the telephone. Pretty mouth; in a few seconds we'll see that the rest of her is

just as pretty.

KATIE

Bill? Oh, he says he doesn't feel very well, but he's always like that

between books . . . can't sleep, thinks every headache is the first

symptom of a brain tumor . . . once he gets going on something

new, he'll be fine.

SOUND, BG: THE TELEVISION.

THE CAMERA DRAWS BACK. KATIE is sitting in the kitchen phone nook, having a good gab

with her sister while she idles through some catalogues. We should notice one not-quite-ordinary

thing about the phone she's on: it's the sort with two lines. There are LIGHTED BUTTONS to

show which ones are engaged. Right now only one — KATIE'S — is. As KATIE CONTINUES

HER CONVERSATION, THE CAMERA SWINGS AWAY FROM HER, TRACKS ACROSS

THE KITCHEN, and through the arched doorway that leads into the family room.

KATIE (voice, fading)

Oh, I saw Janie Charlton today . . . yes! Big as a house! . . .

She fades. The TV gets louder. There are three kids: JEFF, eight, CONNIE, ten, and DENNIS,

thirteen. Wheel of Fortune is on, but they're not watching. Instead they're engaged in that great

pastime, Fighting About What Comes On Later.

JEFF

Come onnn! It was his first book!

CONNIE

His first gross book.

DENNIS

We're gonna watch Cheers and Wings, just like we do every week,

Jeff.

DENNIS speaks with the utter finality only a big brother can manage. 'Wanna talk about it some

more and see how much pain I can inflict on your scrawny body, Jeff?'' his face says.

JEFF

Could we at least tape it?

CONNIE

We're taping CNN for Mom. She said she might be on the phone

with Aunt Lois for quite awhile.

JEFF

How can you tape CNN, for God's sake? It never stops!

DENNIS

That's what she likes about it.

CONNIE

And don't say God's sake, Jeffie — you're not old enough to talk

about God except in church.

JEFF

Then don't call me Jeffie.

CONNIE

Jeffie, Jeffie, Jeffie.

JEFF gets up, walks to the window, and looks out into the dark. He's really upset. DENNIS and

CONNIE, in the grand tradition of older brothers and sisters, are delighted to see it.

DENNIS

Poor Jeffie.

CONNIE

I think he's gonna commit suicide.

JEFF (turns to them)

It was his first book! Don't you guys even care?

CONNIE

Rent it down at the Video Stop tomorrow, if you want to see it so

bad.

JEFF

They don't rent R-rated pictures to little kids and you know it!

CONNIE (DREAMILY)

Shut up, it's Vanna! I love Vanna!

JEFF

Dennis —

DENNIS

Go ask Dad to tape it on the VCR in his office and quit being such

a totally annoying little booger.

JEFF crosses the room, poking his tongue out at Vanna White as he goes. THE CAMERA

FOLLOWS as he goes into the kitchen.

KATIE

. . . so when he asked me if Polly had tested strep positive, I had to

remind him she's away at prep school . . . and God, Lois, I miss

her . . .

JEFF is just passing through, on his way to the stairs.

KATIE

Will you kids please be quiet?

JEFF (glum)

They'll be quiet. Now.

He goes up the stairs, a little dejected. KATIE looks after him for a moment, loving and worried.

KATIE

They're squabbling again. Polly used to keep them in line, but now

that she's away at school . . . I don't know . . . maybe sending her

to Bolton wasn't such a hot idea. Sometimes when she calls home

she sounds so unhappy . . .

INT. BELA LUGOSI AS DRACULA, CU

Drac's standing at the door of his Transylvanian castle. Someone has pasted a comic-balloon

coming out of his mouth which reads: 'Listen! My children of the night! What music they make!'

The poster is on a door but we only see this as JEFF opens it and goes into his father's study.

INT. A PHOTOGRAPH OF KATIE, CU

THE CAMERA HOLDS, THEN PANS SLOWLY RIGHT. We pass another photo, this one of

POLLY, the daughter away at school. She's a lovely girl of sixteen or so. Past POLLY is

DENNIS.. . then CONNIE . . . then JEFF.

THE CAMERA CONTINUES TO PAN AND ALSO WIDENS OUT SO WE can see BILL

WEIDERMAN, a man of about forty-four. He looks tired. He's peering into the word-processor

on his desk, but his mental crystal ball must be taking the night off, because the screen is blank.

On the walls we see framed book-covers. All of them are spooky. One of the titles is Ghost Kiss.

JEFF comes up quietly behind his dad. The carpet muffles his feet. BILL sighs and shuts off the

word-cruncher. A moment later JEFF claps his hands on his father's shoulders.

JEFF

BOOGA-BOOGA!

BILL

Hi, Jeffie. He turns in his chair to look at his son, who is

disappointed.

JEFF

How come you didn't get scared?

BILL

Scaring is my business. I'm case-hardened. Something wrong?

JEFF

Daddy, can I watch the first hour of Ghost Kiss and you tape the

rest? Dennis and Connie are hogging everything.

BILL swivels to look at the book-jacket, bemused.

BILL

You sure you want to watch that, champ? It's pretty —

JEFF

Yes!

INT. KATIE, IN THE PHONE NOOK

In this shot, we clearly see the stairs leading to her husband's study behind her.

KATIE

I really think Jeff needs the orthodontic work but you know Bill —

The other line rings. The other light stutters.

KATIE

That's just the other line, Bill will —

But now we see BILL and JEFF coming downstairs behind her.

BILL

Honey, where're the blank videotapes? I can't find any in the study

and —

KATIE (to BILL)

Wait!

(to LOIS)

Gonna put you on hold a sec, Lo.

She does. Now both lines are blinking. She pushes the top one, where the new call has just come

in.

KATIE

Hello, Weiderman residence.

SOUND: DESPERATE SOBBING.

SOBBING VOICE (filter)

Take . . . please take . . . t-t . . .

KATIE

Polly? Is that you? What's wrong?

SOUND: SOBBING. It's awful, heartbreaking.

Please — quick —

SOBBING VOICE (filter)

SOUND: SOBBING . . . Then, CLICK! A broken connection.

KATIE

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